English Homework again..

Homework-age back again..
My teacher told me to write a letter to NTU..
This is the letter..

Gading Serpong IA AG9/11
Tanggerang, Banten, 8334749
Indonesia

February 24th, 2009

Admission Office Staff
Nanyang Technological University
Administration Building Level 5
50 Nanyang Avenue
Singapore 639798

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am David Giovanni a student in Brilliant Class, a special class for people who have high Intelligent Quotient (IQ). I am writing this letter because I am interested for applying the scholarship in your chemistry department which your university offers.

I want to get more information about the requirements to successfully be one of the scholars. For your information, I am going to take the A Level Chemistry Cambridge test this June. The question that I want to ask is whether the A level certificate have any influences to the admission and scholarship applying. If it do has any influences, I am sorry for submitting my A level certificate a bit late, but I am going to submit my applications first.

Lastly, I would say a deep thank for your attention and I would be happy to receive your reply in my email.

Faithfully Yours,

David Giovanni


I don't know whether it's right or not :)